Friday, October 30, 2015

Life Drawing 2

Critique Received:

Add more dark values to bodies, push dimensionality in a lot of pieces, good posture
Good blue values, and depth, figures look like they have weight and are sitting in space
Neon lights, anatomy is better, more light pink in the blue and pink piece
Make sure colors aren't just isolated incidents
Good use of background color as outline
Include reflective colors, need more line variation
Average foreshortening
Good utilization of brushes
Attention to muscular forms
Utilized texture, and experimentation
Good gesture






Friday, October 23, 2015

Landscape


Critique received

Light should reflect more rocks and be given more range
Two exits are competing as light sources (one should be smaller)
More reflection should be on water
Someone suggested that I add bats and a creature, but Ionnoboutalldat.....

REVISED VERSION:

Friday, October 9, 2015

Master Copying



Original on Right, Mine on Left.
Critique Given:

Both look watercolor-y
Body is curvier in mine
More contrast than original
Should be more hard edges
Chest area is more successful
Face in mine is better, background texture is more successful, more of the figure in mine whereas it, in original, gets lost in the background, dress shape is better than original