Critique received
Light should reflect more rocks and be given more range
Two exits are competing as light sources (one should be smaller)
More reflection should be on water
Someone suggested that I add bats and a creature, but Ionnoboutalldat.....
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Darken the corners of the piece. The person needs to fit into the space more. Their Silhouette is too dark.
ReplyDeleteDarken the corners of the piece. The person needs to fit into the space more. Their Silhouette is too dark.
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